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 Post subject: Curiosity's Folly
PostPosted: 22 Sep 2011, 01:32 
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The door creaked open. Rachel crept into the dark room where her father had fallen asleep at his studies. She picked up a book, covered in black. Rachel shivered; the book was cold to the touch, unusually cold for the warm April night. She took it out the room and tiptoed back along the long corridor of their home, silently closing the door on her bedroom.

Rachel placed the book on her bed and sat down next to it. As she lifted the cover, she thought she heard a sigh escape from the book. She shook her head; there was no way a book could sigh. She raised her hand to her hair, pushing the long brown tress back behind her ear before returning her attention back to the mysterious book her father had forbidden her to look at.
Her bright blue eyes eagerly scanned the lines of the book, drinking in the information offered by the book. She read faster and faster, as though the book itself was possessing her and taking control of her body. Her hands began to feel clammy; a strange heat was filling her up, spreading throughout her entire being. She reached the bottom of the page and turned it, her other hand reaching for the bottom of the light shirt she wore. Rachel lifted it over her head, feeling the sense of overwhelming heat lessen for a brief moment, until her eyes fell back on the page.

A drumbeat began to sound as her heartbeat became louder and louder. She placed one hand on her heart, as though willing it to be still. Yet the book seemed to have other ideas, moving her hand onto her breast, stroking it gently. Slight moans issued from her lips as her fingers lightly brushed the nipple. Rachel began to mutter a small chant, five words written around a pentacle in the book.

“Let the seal be broken.”

The heat continued to build up within her body. She kicked off the slippers and laid on the bed, wriggling out the thin pyjama bottoms and exposing her naked flesh to the air. She continued to chant as the other hand moved down her body. Rachel gasped as her fingers began to close on her most sensitive areas. Almost tentatively at first, she began to slide her fingers up and down the inside of her leg, moving slowly closer. By now she was completely lost in the passion of the moment; the book had taken away all sense of free will, now she belonged to the power that wanted to be free.

Rachel bit her lip as she slid her fingers inside, slowly at first, but building up faster and faster. The chanting became louder, the voice changing from the sweet light voice she possessed to a much deeper voice, one where every syllable oozed power. She moved faster inside herself, feeling every slight movement of her fingers deep within her. She knew a release would come soon, in some small corner of her mind; she remained powerless to stop what was happening yet conscious of it all.

She screamed out those five words again as she reached orgasm. The book, still laid on the bed, was aflame, the pentacle had gone. As the last remnant of the book burnt away, in its place
stood a demon, its body was unmistakable. It turned its coal-like eyes onto the naked form of Rachel, who had regained control of her body. Fearfully she tried to move away, doing her best to cover herself up with anything she could grab.

“Stupid virgin, you have brought a second darkness to the world. For that, you have my... gratitude.” The demon spoke that last word with such disdain, as though it was an effort to use
such a word toward a human.

Tears began to form in the corner of her eye, dripping down the pale cheek and onto her leg.

“W-w-what... have I done...?” The words were barely more than a whisper, spoken to the night as the demon smashed its way through the window and was nothing more than a shadow in the night.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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Yes your imagination is scary. Think this counts as the most explicit piece on the site so far lol.

Nicely written though, were you get your ideas from worry me. Orgasm sucking vampires and now, orgasm unlocking demon prisons.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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this worries you?? the notes i had for this had nothing to do with wat actually got written... im quite concerned bout it

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
PostPosted: 22 Sep 2011, 01:50 
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haha so you should be, at least you're not scared to write about such things as some are

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
PostPosted: 22 Sep 2011, 01:54 
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after writing nosfergasmo, this, and the story with bess, i forget the title, i think fear is the last problem i have with writing this sorta thing

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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clearly haha, and to think i was hesitant about posting Zathryn the first time

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
PostPosted: 22 Sep 2011, 02:12 
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haha, anything you can post, i can post dirtier i think is an appropriate lyric adaptation for this xD

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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I wanted the demon to arrive and say to Rachel, 'And now I shall f**k you, like you've never been f**ked before, stupid virgin.'

Now THAT would have been interesting.

Even so I enjoyed it, particularly how you used the word 'oozed' moments before she climaxed. Nicely done.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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that wudve been more interesting... damnit

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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'And now I shall f**k you, like you've never been f**ked before, stupid virgin.'


that could mean anything, it could be very average but it'd still be like never before

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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Or he could have said: 'This will be your last f**k.'

So then eliminates the possibility of her ever getting better or worse sex.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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basically sparky the demon needs to f**k her, get on it, or get them on it

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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edit a HHC... do i dare do this...

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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just take next months to mean it, has there ever been a HHC sequel?

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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yeah, lilith has done a few

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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Oh my god, your demon should totally spawn and have like a massive
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orgy with Rachel...


Damn my mind is bad tonight!

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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i can make this happen... like seriously, i could do that

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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what bring his other demon friends?

....

silver what have we created here?

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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silver what have we created here?


I don't know Dice. I honestly don't know!

We've broken all hell loose?!

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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you may regret this :P

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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OK, that was awesome. Can I request that Rachel be between the ages of 16 and 19? Then I approve, and approve of any such sequel.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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aww nd ther was me thinking she shud be 14... xD jk

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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I'll accept 15?

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Well, you gotta know when to hold 'em, know when to fold 'em, know when to walk away, know when to run... I think we can conclude that "She Who Must be Obeyed" won that round.

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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cuz i was kidding lol i never had an age in mind for her. 16 wud be bout ryt though i think

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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OK, that's cool. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Curiosity's Folly
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ive jus plotted this out... if i manage typing this out within 30 minutes, itll be the horror hhc, if not, ah well

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