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 Post subject: Nice Mummy
PostPosted: 06 Oct 2015, 09:08 
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“Mummy, when is Daddy coming to see me again?”
“Probably never. You’re such a naughty girl. You answer me back; you won’t do as your told. He probably doesn’t love you any more. Any way, he’s got a new family now.”
Sobbing “He said he would always love me.”
“Yes, well, he said that to me too, but he’s shacked up with his floozy, just the same.”
“He said I would always be his little girl.”
“Well he has a new little girl now. She’s well behaved; does as her mummy says; is polite and beautiful.”
“Oh Mummy. I was always good for Daddy.”
“Yes you were, you little bitch! Well, he must have seen through you, ‘cos he’s gone. And if you don’t behave yourself, I’ll leave you too. Now give over snivelling and go and get your chores done.”

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Wow. So harsh - can see a little bit of the devil in there!

I really want to know what the Mum was like underneath the skin. Was she that evil? Just hurt? Was her daughter evil, or maybe just hurt? Interesting, good stuff. :) Guess someone's horns were holding up a halo.

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 Post subject: Re: Nice Mummy
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Wow. So harsh - can see a little bit of the devil in there!

I really want to know what the Mum was like underneath the skin. Was she that evil? Just hurt? Was her daughter evil, or maybe just hurt? Interesting, good stuff. :) Guess someone's horns were holding up a halo.


I've seen divorcing couples use their children as ammunition and been sickened to my craw. This snapshot paints Mum in a very bad light but, one could argue, Dad has not behaved much better. One thing is sure: the daughter will be scarred for life.

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This is true. Divorce is such a terrible thing to have to go through. I'm thankful that I've never had to, though know so many who have. The scarring fades in time, but it's never the same. Never whole.

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